I absolutely adore this story. I've already played through it so many different times just to see the different results. The writing is wonderful. The designs of the characters are stunning (and the logo is so pretty). I loved the options we had to design the character, and appreciate that the dev linked resources so you could create a character that fits the setting of the game more!!! Love this game and cannot wait for an update!!
I am so excited for the updates! I love this story so much, and I love how real all the characters feel. Not gonna lie: I kind of want to play it through a million times to see the results of different choices! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story!
Hey will 'romance' options will be available in later game ?
And could we date other people other than those four chicks/guys as i am really curious about what Lady Naza (i don't remember the exact name but it some what sounds like Naza.) is upto. Though she is bold enough to face us . Really curious about her ! ;)
Nope. The four love interests at the start of the game are the only romance options available, because the game splits off into their individual routes. Adding more options is a bit too much writing for me!
I love this game so much! I like how kind all the LI's are, and how comfortable they are. I feel like they all respect the MC's feelings and pace. Your writing is also fantastic. It's easy to read but also descriptive and easy to get lost in. I also love how you handled the MC's trauma. I hope that they have plenty of chances to heal with the help of the LIs.
The only (very small, very unimportant) problem I have is that there doesn't seem to be very many save files? I'm the kind of person that likes to save every chapter and go back and see what would happen if I make different choices, so having only 8 save files makes me a little nervous lol, like I have to be more careful. Maybe that's the point?
Anyways, thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I am really looking forward to future chapters.
Thanks so much for the kind words!! Healing from past trauma will definitely be a major theme for MC ❤️
As for the save files, they are a built-in feature of Twine's story format that I unfortunately can't edit or adjust in any way beyond... removing it completely lol. I would've really liked to have at least 15 slots open, sorry about that 😔
Hey! Good news about those save files, the game has the option to save/load from disk, so you can create a folder for your characters and have as many files there as you want. The saves won't appear on the list when you press saves, but if you chose the load from disk option you can access them. I use this to have a folder for each MC in order to play all routes. Or just name the file by MC-Chapter number. Hope it helps :)
i'm absolutely smitten for general dara. he makes my heart have so much gay yearning </3 i'm extremely excited for the next chapters and any developments to this story!! i can't wait for more!!
I just started the chapter 3 and I'm just like "WHO DO I CHOOSE?????" already because they are all so marvelous... T_T Really, I already love all of the LIs, they are amazing, THE BANTER IS JUST GOLD, my sappy heart can't take all of this, it is already sighing and dreaming without control and jumping from one to another at every moment. Who to choose first? Dara? Azad? Rêzan? Xelef? Who knows, certainly not me xD
Aw, well that's what replays are for!! ❤️Although having to pick someone first would definitely be a dilemma.... Maybe you could pull a name out of a hat or something? lol
The first gameplay, at least for me, is the sweetest, is the one were I'm just discovering everything with fresh eyes and the LI choose usually is the one to impact me more, doesn't matter the game xD
In the end I choose Dara because... All the blushing regarding pleasure houses? Just GOLD. Also... I was roleplaying a shy crown and the interactions were just WONDERFUL, D going all "I'LL PROTECT YOU!" and then all flustered because "I MEAN, UHM..." and... My heart couldn't resist. It was a close competition with Azad, because oh, how I love mysterious aesthetic but secretly soft and kind.
Also, I made a shy and assertive Crown to romance Xelef and it was terrible funny, I couldn't stop laughing and blushing along.
I need to do Rêzan's now, but I'm still deciding on the character I'll make for Rêzan lol
this was so good, i'm excited for more! it's so interesting and well-written, and i love being able to customise your character. so far, i'm a total sucker for Xelara (what can i say, you had me at 'muscular arms')
This is game beautifully written and skillfully charming, I find myself constanly replaying it to see the other options and having geniuenly fall in love with every character, I'm excited for chapter five!
Just reading the description for this game made me incredibly excited. I'm like two pages in and your writing is so beautiful and gripping, thank you so much for your hard work, I'm looking forward to watching this grow! <3
I just started playing this (read the first two chapters so far) and this is SO incredible so far. I love what i've seen of the characters and the worldbuilding and i cannot WAIT to plow through the rest. You've really got something special here and I can't wait to see the rest that you come up with. I've never read a text-choice story like this before (only recently got into visual novels or games like this at all) and this is so fun and immersive and truly wonderful. I love how inclusive it is!! (the fact that I can actually make ALL of the LIs ladies if i want instead of only getting to choose the single option for a queer character is really lovely). I really can't say enough wonderful things so far<3
Omg thank you so very much for the kind words!! ❤️ Inclusivity was definitely a main focus for me in this, so I'm happy you could appreciate that aspect of it!
What a treasure this story is! It's so immersive and beautifully written that I can't help but wait anxiously for the next update! This is actually the first time that I'm torn between two characters (Azad and Dara), they are so unique and the way their relationships get more intimate with the Crown is so organic, I can't wait for the rest! Thanks for sharing it with us!
I loved this game. Thank you so much for creating this content. I do have a question though, how do I go back from the last page (that says to not save while on it) so I can save the game?
I'm afraid you'll have to load up your most recent save, if you have one, and play back up to the part right before that screen so you can save properly. Sorry for the inconvenience 😅
Literally found this on twitter by chance yesterday, and what a great find this is! I wonder if I should make it a point to raise all 4 RO's relationships during the common route - will the non-LI's values be relevant later on, or should I just focus on whomever I like most?
I'm glad to hear that!! ❤️ As for the game, I'd say in the common route you should try figuring out who you like most and sticking with them. The relationship points are very small for the common route, as the max you can get is 10, so you won't have any drawbacks befriending the other (non-)LIs once you've picked your route!
Really good so far! The story is engaging and the character's personalities are deep and intricate, making interacting with them really interesting. Keep up the good work!
I haven't finished the common route yet but so far I'm loving it! I love the characters personalities and the customisation options. Being able to choose to be a bi character and therefore having a mix of genders for the love interests is just a lovely addition. (My bi heart is so conflicted and I love them all so far.). The overall story is very interesting so far and I'm definitely hooked on this world you've created :D
I can't wait for more chapters already and I'm definitely going to be replaying to explore the different personality options.
Thank you, I'm happy to hear that!! MC customization was definitely a focus for me, so I'm glad you like it. Hope you enjoy the rest of the game as well ❤️
I have played the beta, and i love it very much! The world building is very vivid, with interesting MC's personality and superb characters. Thumbs upp! 👍
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I absolutely adore this story. I've already played through it so many different times just to see the different results. The writing is wonderful. The designs of the characters are stunning (and the logo is so pretty). I loved the options we had to design the character, and appreciate that the dev linked resources so you could create a character that fits the setting of the game more!!! Love this game and cannot wait for an update!!
Thank you so much!! ❤️ I'm glad I found such a talented artist to commission, she really brought my characters to life.
I am so excited for the updates! I love this story so much, and I love how real all the characters feel. Not gonna lie: I kind of want to play it through a million times to see the results of different choices! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story!
Aw, thank you!! ❤️ I'd hoped the game would have a lot of replay value, considering how long updates are taking me haha
a really nice game, i really enjoy this
all the character feel alive and not just some puppets, and the pacing of the story is also very nice , its all around just an A+ writing
thank you for making this, can't wait for the next update
Thanks so much!! ❤️
How do the mentors work? I got Perjin but I was wonder if there were other mentors you can get?
btw thank you so much for this wonderful game! I have loved every moment so far :)
The mentors/tutors aren't a game mechanic haha, the rest of them will be introduced in the next couple of chapters!
Thanks for commenting ❤️
Nice game.
Hey will 'romance' options will be available in later game ?
And could we date other people other than those four chicks/guys as i am really curious about what Lady Naza (i don't remember the exact name but it some what sounds like Naza.) is upto. Though she is bold enough to face us . Really curious about her ! ;)
Nope. The four love interests at the start of the game are the only romance options available, because the game splits off into their individual routes. Adding more options is a bit too much writing for me!
I love this game so much! I like how kind all the LI's are, and how comfortable they are. I feel like they all respect the MC's feelings and pace. Your writing is also fantastic. It's easy to read but also descriptive and easy to get lost in. I also love how you handled the MC's trauma. I hope that they have plenty of chances to heal with the help of the LIs.
The only (very small, very unimportant) problem I have is that there doesn't seem to be very many save files? I'm the kind of person that likes to save every chapter and go back and see what would happen if I make different choices, so having only 8 save files makes me a little nervous lol, like I have to be more careful. Maybe that's the point?
Anyways, thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I am really looking forward to future chapters.
Thanks so much for the kind words!! Healing from past trauma will definitely be a major theme for MC ❤️
As for the save files, they are a built-in feature of Twine's story format that I unfortunately can't edit or adjust in any way beyond... removing it completely lol. I would've really liked to have at least 15 slots open, sorry about that 😔
Hey! Good news about those save files, the game has the option to save/load from disk, so you can create a folder for your characters and have as many files there as you want. The saves won't appear on the list when you press saves, but if you chose the load from disk option you can access them. I use this to have a folder for each MC in order to play all routes. Or just name the file by MC-Chapter number. Hope it helps :)
Thank you so much! I had no idea I could do that.
i'm absolutely smitten for general dara. he makes my heart have so much gay yearning </3 i'm extremely excited for the next chapters and any developments to this story!! i can't wait for more!!
D's route is definitely optimized for Gay Yearning, it's a bit of a slowburn 😌❤️
I just started the chapter 3 and I'm just like "WHO DO I CHOOSE?????" already because they are all so marvelous... T_T Really, I already love all of the LIs, they are amazing, THE BANTER IS JUST GOLD, my sappy heart can't take all of this, it is already sighing and dreaming without control and jumping from one to another at every moment. Who to choose first? Dara? Azad? Rêzan? Xelef? Who knows, certainly not me xD
Aw, well that's what replays are for!! ❤️Although having to pick someone first would definitely be a dilemma.... Maybe you could pull a name out of a hat or something? lol
The first gameplay, at least for me, is the sweetest, is the one were I'm just discovering everything with fresh eyes and the LI choose usually is the one to impact me more, doesn't matter the game xD
In the end I choose Dara because... All the blushing regarding pleasure houses? Just GOLD. Also... I was roleplaying a shy crown and the interactions were just WONDERFUL, D going all "I'LL PROTECT YOU!" and then all flustered because "I MEAN, UHM..." and... My heart couldn't resist. It was a close competition with Azad, because oh, how I love mysterious aesthetic but secretly soft and kind.
Also, I made a shy and assertive Crown to romance Xelef and it was terrible funny, I couldn't stop laughing and blushing along.
I need to do Rêzan's now, but I'm still deciding on the character I'll make for Rêzan lol
Anyway. I deeply love this game <3
this was so good, i'm excited for more! it's so interesting and well-written, and i love being able to customise your character. so far, i'm a total sucker for Xelara (what can i say, you had me at 'muscular arms')
Thanks so much!! ❤️ I knew the muscular arms were going to be a big selling point for Xelara haha
I love this game so much, I can't wait for the next chapter! I just adore the way you write, too! (And I can't help but fall for Azad!
Aw, thank you!! Azad is an excellent choice 😌
This is game beautifully written and skillfully charming, I find myself constanly replaying it to see the other options and having geniuenly fall in love with every character, I'm excited for chapter five!
Thank you!! ❤️ I hope to finish the next chapter within the next couple of weeks, provided I can manage my workload for university properly haha
Just reading the description for this game made me incredibly excited. I'm like two pages in and your writing is so beautiful and gripping, thank you so much for your hard work, I'm looking forward to watching this grow! <3
Thanks so much!! Hope you enjoy the game ❤️
I just started playing this (read the first two chapters so far) and this is SO incredible so far. I love what i've seen of the characters and the worldbuilding and i cannot WAIT to plow through the rest. You've really got something special here and I can't wait to see the rest that you come up with. I've never read a text-choice story like this before (only recently got into visual novels or games like this at all) and this is so fun and immersive and truly wonderful. I love how inclusive it is!! (the fact that I can actually make ALL of the LIs ladies if i want instead of only getting to choose the single option for a queer character is really lovely). I really can't say enough wonderful things so far<3
Omg thank you so very much for the kind words!! ❤️ Inclusivity was definitely a main focus for me in this, so I'm happy you could appreciate that aspect of it!
What a treasure this story is! It's so immersive and beautifully written that I can't help but wait anxiously for the next update! This is actually the first time that I'm torn between two characters (Azad and Dara), they are so unique and the way their relationships get more intimate with the Crown is so organic, I can't wait for the rest! Thanks for sharing it with us!
Thanks so much!! ❤️ More people seem torn between LIs so you're definitely not alone in that, but at least you can have multiple playthroughs haha
I loved this game. Thank you so much for creating this content. I do have a question though, how do I go back from the last page (that says to not save while on it) so I can save the game?
I'm afraid you'll have to load up your most recent save, if you have one, and play back up to the part right before that screen so you can save properly. Sorry for the inconvenience 😅
Literally found this on twitter by chance yesterday, and what a great find this is! I wonder if I should make it a point to raise all 4 RO's relationships during the common route - will the non-LI's values be relevant later on, or should I just focus on whomever I like most?
I'm glad to hear that!! ❤️ As for the game, I'd say in the common route you should try figuring out who you like most and sticking with them. The relationship points are very small for the common route, as the max you can get is 10, so you won't have any drawbacks befriending the other (non-)LIs once you've picked your route!
Really good so far! The story is engaging and the character's personalities are deep and intricate, making interacting with them really interesting. Keep up the good work!
Thank you, I really appreciate that!! ❤️
This story has left me on the edge of my seat it is the BEST story ever and i cant wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much!! I'm working to get Chapter Five out ASAP, hopefully I'll make it by the end of September, or otherwise the start of October ❤️
I haven't finished the common route yet but so far I'm loving it! I love the characters personalities and the customisation options. Being able to choose to be a bi character and therefore having a mix of genders for the love interests is just a lovely addition. (My bi heart is so conflicted and I love them all so far.). The overall story is very interesting so far and I'm definitely hooked on this world you've created :D
I can't wait for more chapters already and I'm definitely going to be replaying to explore the different personality options.
Thank you, I'm happy to hear that!! MC customization was definitely a focus for me, so I'm glad you like it. Hope you enjoy the rest of the game as well ❤️
I have played the beta, and i love it very much! The world building is very vivid, with interesting MC's personality and superb characters. Thumbs upp! 👍
Thanks so much!! ❤️
I follow you on tumblr and love the game :D I'm so happy you decided to upload it here!
Oh, hi! Yeah, I recognize the name, I've seen you on tumblr! Happy to see you here too ❤️